04/03/2013: we are on the verge of nearly finishing all of our 2-minute opening production, having finished most of the editing we are looking back on what areas we can improve on which would make it more curious.
For example, in our video lily (Rashmi/protagonist) is walking into the alley way and is held up by the mystery man however he only questions her saying "where have you been?" then the scene sways to an extreme-close-up of her eye. This doesn't pace and make as much sense as we want the guy to do something which would make it more realistic, scary and frightening. Allowing to the audience to feel shocked and curious this will result only when we create the specific enigma code.
ACTION: to re-shoot the alley way scene, perhaps adding a headlock or something exciting/frightened which would leave the audience shocked and entice them to wanting to watch more.
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